Haiku by ST ST The Simon Tao April 8, 2021 Smell of gunpowder Cartridge spent, bullet is sent Friendly fire isn’t Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading... Related Published by ST USMC Mustang 0302/0303 View all posts by ST Published April 8, 2021
Do you prefer “isn’t” or ‘is not’ as the final syllables? I think I prefer ‘is not.’ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
“is not” keeps the sharp, staccato rhythm your words are meant to convey; immersing the reader, oh-so-briefly in battle. You are a samurai in every sense, ST. (Is this the book’s epigraph, I hope?) LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Do you prefer “isn’t” or ‘is not’ as the final syllables?
I think I prefer ‘is not.’
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I agree with you and Nanda. “Is not” works better than “isn’t.”
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“is not” keeps the sharp, staccato rhythm your words are meant to convey; immersing the reader, oh-so-briefly in battle. You are a samurai in every sense, ST. (Is this the book’s epigraph, I hope?)
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