Time to tweak this bad-boy. Just wanted to bring it to mind and tell you I wrote it on Valentine’s Day after finishing a plate of baby-back ribs at Applebees, cold and alone on FEB 14. I asked the waitress for a piece of paper and pen because the poem sort of fell into my head almost fully formed. I wote it down in less than 5 minutes on the back of another table’s receipt, showed it to the waitress and I think her eyes glazed over for a quick sec.
I will republish the 2d draft in a bit.
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Cut me to the bone
with your tongue
Break my heart
with your tortures
But my Love
when you turn your smile onto me
the pain and heartbreak
go away and
I recall why and know that
I love you
Not the rest of the story but at least more. The rest is yet unwritten as Mrs. BKK is, as we speak, with child.
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Wow!
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Does she look like ‘youth in the mud’ to anyone other than BDB?
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That guy is such a bitter loser.
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My prayer is for him to get all he deserves.
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A wee bit envious of yours truly perhaps?
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Yes, and also totally lacking in self awareness. He wears his jealousy on his sleeve.
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He reminds me of so many just like him idiot brainiacs.
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“Idiot brainiacs” I love it! Copyright it 🙂
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